Tuesday, March 3, 2009

An Uli

May bago na naman akong bisto,

Maugma ako.

 

Maabot an panahon,

Tatauhan ko siya ki pirang oras

Nin sakong pahingalo.

2 comments:

T A B A K N O N said...

i think the word'turog' should somehow
possess an incoming effect on the first line,
maikli kasi masyado. baka malito, sila.
any, ala namang kaparis ang poem
na' to. siguro, masyado kong iaapura ang
dating ng mensahe, sana hindi kita nasugatan,
o pina-init an ulo mo.

rawitdawit said...

Dear Sir, your comment is very helpful

Many thsnks -- erik

 


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