i think the word'turog' should somehow possess an incoming effect on the first line, maikli kasi masyado. baka malito, sila. any, ala namang kaparis ang poem na' to. siguro, masyado kong iaapura ang dating ng mensahe, sana hindi kita nasugatan, o pina-init an ulo mo.
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i think the word'turog' should somehow
possess an incoming effect on the first line,
maikli kasi masyado. baka malito, sila.
any, ala namang kaparis ang poem
na' to. siguro, masyado kong iaapura ang
dating ng mensahe, sana hindi kita nasugatan,
o pina-init an ulo mo.
Dear Sir, your comment is very helpful
Many thsnks -- erik
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